While I breathe, I hope...
Dum spiro, spero. While I breathe, I hope, he believed, enshrouded in darkness, still looking for those pieces of Heaven.
Dum spiro, spero, she murmured, enwrapped in gloomy thoughts, with hopes still flickering in her soul.
Two years later they met and the sun clothed their lives with golden light.
While I breathe, I hope...
Another one for 55FictionSaturdays
PS: I am taking a short break here, couple of weeks maybe.. Really very busywith office stuff. I will occasionally write and try to visit your blogs. Cannot promise though. You all take care.
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One of your best FFF ever sweetu!Loved the verbs,very powerful :)
Enjoy the break ;)
who says its not good :x
it is..it is.. it definitely is :)
enjoy ur break with loads of offc works chookcha :P
Wonderfully written! :)
Don't work too hard, sweetie!
woah!
each fff is better than the other!!
loved it
will miss ya..
good one!
yeah Hope is the one which tells us to look into the future :) !
U enjoy your break and take care :)...
kewl stuff... on the mark :)
enjoy your break mate... cheers...
nice one :)..
gud words!
great...!!!!
simple...nd superb..!!
good work dear...your 55fiction rock..!!!
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While I breath, I hope :)
Happy working
Take care
GBU
Arti
:D
Come back soon. Waiting...
nice work :)
:D Good one!!
Hey hope your work ends soon!! I'd wait for you to come back!!
Hey I wrote a 55 Fiction too...check it out when free!!
Take Care
what you do is really tough...
b'fully written...
Glad to read ur post I am always.
Very delicate words woven into profundity....
this was by far the best ever!!
just awesome janu! loved it!
have a good break and come back with an even better one! :)
Next time, don't you *dare* tell me about not writing in English. :P
And that was another one of your profound 55FS. :)
Peace. Be well.
Good one, Lena :)
wishes,
devika
hey come back soon lena...
wow.... while i breath i do hope,
thought i don't understand other words, i like it...
how do u do this?? every single time!!!
its beautiful :)...u tc lena :)..
urs..hemu..
good one :)
Few words that paint us an entire world.. Great fiction Saturday!.. enjoy your break!..
mmm- lovely piece
I awarded you with the Lemonade Award. No rush in picking it up, since you're taking a break. I understand busy!
good work girlie..and dont take a long break come back soon waiting to read the next 55...
and i came here to read Tuesday love ramblings!! :|
that was lovely..
hope to see u soon.. take care.. 'll miss u
Very creative your 55 words, I will try to do it from time to time.
Thanks Lena for your comments on my poem (Delivery)..You are the only one so far that really got the most of it..You read it carefully and you opened your imagination so widely
I hope that you visit my blog regularly..
Thanks again
hey im missing ya already!!!!!!!!!!! :(
Hi Lena,
A first timer here. You have got a well maintained blog. Your story series looks cool, with out of box thinking ;)
Let the creative juices keep flowing !! :)
Regards,
Prashant Sree
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simply beautiful...
We all need a break once in awhile. Enjoy.
i need to talk to u before i comment :P
nicly written dear..
Amazing! Nice blog you haev here...Come back soon.
short and simple... yet delicately beautiful :)
Hi.......
Those are absolutely fascinating. Wonderful post!
Hi Lena
Powerful words...Beautiful!
Enjoy your break
You take care Lena! Breathing....ah such good advice.
Hugs, G
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